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15 October 2008 @ 08:41 pm
Drabble: Raw  
Title: Raw
Author: Vesta
No pairing
Rating: R for violence (just to be safe)
Notes: Fourth in the Under-verse, aka Shittyday-verse
Follows Under, Below and Beneath




The rough bricks scrape his face raw, make the world spin sickening crazy when the hand at the back of his head slams him against it again and again.

"Don't you ever say no to us!"

He'd answer if he could, but his mouth is bleeding, tongue dangling half-bitten, pain screaming through him. He doesn't know where it begins or where it ends. Maybe at his throat, where his skin is the thinnest, where their teeth bite through like knives through butter. They said no pain but they lied, like he knew they would. He tries to say no again.


 
 
Current Mood: determined
 
 
 
iamstealthyoneiamstealthyone on October 15th, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
Ow.

Dark.

And nicely done. :)
Vesta: twobiggelois on October 16th, 2008 12:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you! This is seriously better than a punching bag. I can make more damage here :)
softbluebuddy: Bad Day at the Officesoftbluebuddy on October 16th, 2008 03:15 am (UTC)
Wow.

This is a very scary place to find yourself and with some very nasty people.
Vesta: twobiggelois on October 16th, 2008 12:03 pm (UTC)
Told you Daddy W would get his :) I don't think he's happy right now, but I have the feeling he will be before this is over...