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07 November 2008 @ 06:20 pm
Drabble: Please  
Title: Please
Author: Vesta
No pairing
Rating: R just to be safe
100 words sharp
Notes: Sixth in the Under-verse, aka Shittyday-verse. Can't help but love softbluebuddy for giving me that verse name. When life truly sucks, you get a comment like that and can't keep up being pissy. It's the small things...
Follows Under, Below, Beneath, Raw and Bittersweet





'Please' comes so easy. He can feel it slither in his mouth, tasting of ashes and bile. He doesn't care, too hungry, too starved. They gave and then took it away.

'Beg' they say. 'Ask for it. Just ask.' Their hands are so gentle when they touch him, not the blinding splinters of agony anymore. He can feel his love resound in them. See the end of the tunnel. He doesn't cry anymore, doesn't say no. Wants too much, picks a shard of glass, cuts his palms bleeding. Offers them to drink. 'Please'.

They eat, like nursing babies. His again.

 
 
Current Mood: cold
 
 
 
caz2y5: baddaycaz2y5 on November 8th, 2008 12:15 am (UTC)
seems odd to say this but I love the shittydayverse!

its definately in my top 5 verses.
Vesta: twobiggelois on November 8th, 2008 11:10 am (UTC)
Why, thank you, ma'am. I'm glad I could tickle your 'twisted' bone with this. Excellent that you stick with me too :)
caz2y5: zombies ate my iconcaz2y5 on November 9th, 2008 12:19 pm (UTC)
Hey just coz i suck at keeping up with what all my friends are doing or what day it is, doesn't mean i don't know a good thing when im onto it!

plus my twisted bone Is like bigger than the state of Texas and it NEEDS tickling alot!

haha!
Vesta: twobiggelois on November 9th, 2008 12:31 pm (UTC)
Hee, didn't mean it like that. Just think it's cool that you still like it :)

I'll do my best to keep tickling you.
softbluebuddysoftbluebuddy on November 8th, 2008 01:31 am (UTC)
I love you too. And this drabble was really good. Still so dark, but this one, and I feel insane for saying so, is *lighter* because wow.

I guess that means the others were dark like being underground in a cave with no lights dark.

I think it was the nursing babies phrase that lightened it up for me. Or should that freak me the hell out???? I don't know. I'm so confused.
Vesta: twobiggelois on November 8th, 2008 11:13 am (UTC)
It has taken a turn for a sort of lighter note. Who can really resist one's kids? Eventually they will wear you down.

Thanks muchos, luv.