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18 September 2008 @ 04:28 pm
Drabble; Under  
This is what happens when I am less than happy. I have to torture someone. So I did.

Title: Under
No names mentioned
Rating: R for implied violence and abuse
Wordcount: 200 words sharp

The first one itched.
The second one stung.
The third one burned.
The fourth one hurt like hell
The fifth one told about never stopping
The sixth one made him cry
The seventh one had him screaming
The eighth one took his eyes
The ninth one took his tongue
The tenth made him grateful because he could sleep after

He couldn't see the sun but felt its heat stroke his skin. The air smelt stale and blood and he was so glad he couldn't see. Glad he couldn't scream. The broken glass under his feet splintered and exploded into his already bleeding soles, spreading small fires of pain into his burning veins.
He would never get out. He was trapped here. Under. He could hear them move up above. They would soon come again, they had promised. They liked to see him bleed and tell him how pretty he was with the crimson stains covering his body. He tried to fight them off and they laughed. Maybe they would give him his eyes back one day so he could see for himself.
He didn't want that. He didn't want to see. Didn't want to see what his children had become.

Current Mood: devious
meluivan_indilmeluivan_indil on September 18th, 2008 02:42 pm (UTC)
Damn, and did you! Whoa!
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 18th, 2008 02:45 pm (UTC)
Yup. I feel much better now. Nothing's like inflicting pain on someone when you're feeling down.
iamstealthyoneiamstealthyone on September 18th, 2008 03:01 pm (UTC)
Maybe they would give him his eyes back one day so he could see for himself. He didn't want that. He didn't want to see. Didn't want to see what his children had become.


These Winchesters suffer so much.

Nicely done.
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 18th, 2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
But they suffer so well, don't you think?
Thank you very much!
iamstealthyoneiamstealthyone on September 18th, 2008 03:14 pm (UTC)
They suffer exceedingly well. *g*
ckllckll on September 18th, 2008 04:16 pm (UTC)
Your writing is so good.
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 18th, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked my little piece of therapeutic steam blowing.
softbluebuddy: Bad Day at the Officesoftbluebuddy on September 19th, 2008 06:40 am (UTC)
Wow, now that was dark.

You warned me about the darkness when I called you funny. I didn't believe you.

Now I do. Damn.
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 19th, 2008 02:45 pm (UTC)
See? I told you. I do things like this when I'm pissed and need to blow steam. At least I'm keeping it to paper experiences. For now...
softbluebuddysoftbluebuddy on September 19th, 2008 03:21 pm (UTC)
I was just in the kitchen making coffee and thinking about you. Are you doing better today? You must be so frustrated.

I was really depressed/pissed off a few weeks ago and I guess I'm just a big wuss because instead of going all darkside I actually cried and wrote something that will never see the light of day but was more not necessarily *why me*, but definitely not a proactive *bitch slap* at whoever/whatever was pissing me off.

I actually think your method may be healthier.
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 19th, 2008 05:21 pm (UTC)
You've been thinking of me? Has to be the reason that I'm actually feeling ok now :)

Frustration level is hitting new heights. Went to see the student councelors today though, and they agreed on that SP!T is behaving oddly. They are on the case as we speak. If it'll do any good only time can tell.

Healthier, I don't know. But it sure feels good to be really nasty once in a while. Bitch slapping is good to, I only wish I could dish it out RL style.

The 'why me' is so necessary, you know. You have to feel sorry for yourself once in a while. It just bugs me that you had to.

softbluebuddysoftbluebuddy on September 19th, 2008 06:54 pm (UTC)
Yes, I was thinking about you. Since we have the same morning ritual of enjoying our first two cups of coffee in the morning while surfing LJ or whatever, I sometimes find that when I am going through the motions in the kitchen of grinding the beans and pouring the water into the pot, I think of you, a person that I have never met, doing the same thing half a world away and about 10 to 12 hours opposite of when I do it and I smile and think that the world isn't as big a place as it used to feel.

That I have invisible friends that are really cool and it makes me smile.
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 20th, 2008 11:39 am (UTC)
It is cool to have an invisible friend: I haven't had one since I was a kid.
I seriously doubt though that you are even close to my level of unconciousnses in the mornings :)
Did you feel the fuzzy, friendly thought I sent this morning while I made my coffee?
softbluebuddysoftbluebuddy on September 20th, 2008 04:45 pm (UTC)
I actually went to sleep before midnight last night which is very unusual for me so I was probably sleeping when you were making your coffee.

But mine is going through it's cycle right now and I am waiting for my very first cup. Checking my email helps me not be so impatient for that first sip of the nectar of the Gods.

If coffee did not exist my life would suck. I love everything about it. They could quadruple the price and I'd still by it, drink it. But, shhhhhhhhhhh don't tell *them* that.
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 20th, 2008 05:20 pm (UTC)
I'm with you on the coffee matter there. I can skip food and the lot but without coffee...Nope, not gonna happen.

So, good morning! I've just poured myself a glas of wine, it's Saturday night after all, and I'm trying to chase hubby away from the TV so I can watch some SPN with kids.

Cheers, luv! Enjoy your cuppa.
softbluebuddysoftbluebuddy on September 20th, 2008 05:25 pm (UTC)
I'm going to get my second cup now. Did you get to see the season premiere of SPN?
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 20th, 2008 05:30 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah! I found it early Friday morning, had it waiting all day! urgh. But I got kids off to Friday night disco and then...

Me liked. A lot. You?
softbluebuddy: Soldier Boysoftbluebuddy on September 20th, 2008 05:50 pm (UTC)
OMG, It was perfect.

.SOLDIER.OF.GOD. Is how I refer to Dean now.

Yeah, I actually couldn't breathe when Castiel said, "I am an angel of the lord."

I was completely spoiler free so that made it even better. I loved every second of it, from beginning to end. There were a few things I loved less than others, most of them having to do with Sam, but I think that is just Kripke being plotty and will be relevant later.

I love the episodes that Kripke writes. I love how much he loves the character of Dean Winchester. Even though Jared has top billing because he was cast first, I have heard Kripke say that the show really is about Dean. I love when he writes eps because they are very Dean-centric and I can feel that Kripke loves Dean like we do. He isn't a fangirl, but maybe a fanboy.
Vesta: DA2biggelois on September 21st, 2008 11:47 am (UTC)
I saw two short clips earlier. Got quite surprised by what happened to the psychic.
The entire episode was great. All the space given to 'Dean made my day :)I wonder if we get to see more of the glimpses he has though,I guess they are memories from hell popping up.
That Castiel guy, serious eye-candy.
caz2y5: god yescaz2y5 on September 19th, 2008 10:19 am (UTC)
ohh i like it it gave me chills!
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 19th, 2008 02:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Glad to bring you chills :)

Love the icon!
caz2y5: dean eyebrowscaz2y5 on September 20th, 2008 10:39 am (UTC)
your welcome!