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18 September 2008 @ 04:28 pm
Drabble; Under  
This is what happens when I am less than happy. I have to torture someone. So I did.

Title: Under
No names mentioned
Rating: R for implied violence and abuse
Wordcount: 200 words sharp

The first one itched.
The second one stung.
The third one burned.
The fourth one hurt like hell
The fifth one told about never stopping
The sixth one made him cry
The seventh one had him screaming
The eighth one took his eyes
The ninth one took his tongue
The tenth made him grateful because he could sleep after

He couldn't see the sun but felt its heat stroke his skin. The air smelt stale and blood and he was so glad he couldn't see. Glad he couldn't scream. The broken glass under his feet splintered and exploded into his already bleeding soles, spreading small fires of pain into his burning veins.
He would never get out. He was trapped here. Under. He could hear them move up above. They would soon come again, they had promised. They liked to see him bleed and tell him how pretty he was with the crimson stains covering his body. He tried to fight them off and they laughed. Maybe they would give him his eyes back one day so he could see for himself.
He didn't want that. He didn't want to see. Didn't want to see what his children had become.

Current Mood: devious
softbluebuddysoftbluebuddy on September 20th, 2008 05:25 pm (UTC)
I'm going to get my second cup now. Did you get to see the season premiere of SPN?
Vesta: twobiggelois on September 20th, 2008 05:30 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah! I found it early Friday morning, had it waiting all day! urgh. But I got kids off to Friday night disco and then...

Me liked. A lot. You?
softbluebuddy: Soldier Boysoftbluebuddy on September 20th, 2008 05:50 pm (UTC)
OMG, It was perfect.

.SOLDIER.OF.GOD. Is how I refer to Dean now.

Yeah, I actually couldn't breathe when Castiel said, "I am an angel of the lord."

I was completely spoiler free so that made it even better. I loved every second of it, from beginning to end. There were a few things I loved less than others, most of them having to do with Sam, but I think that is just Kripke being plotty and will be relevant later.

I love the episodes that Kripke writes. I love how much he loves the character of Dean Winchester. Even though Jared has top billing because he was cast first, I have heard Kripke say that the show really is about Dean. I love when he writes eps because they are very Dean-centric and I can feel that Kripke loves Dean like we do. He isn't a fangirl, but maybe a fanboy.
Vesta: DA2biggelois on September 21st, 2008 11:47 am (UTC)
I saw two short clips earlier. Got quite surprised by what happened to the psychic.
The entire episode was great. All the space given to 'Dean made my day :)I wonder if we get to see more of the glimpses he has though,I guess they are memories from hell popping up.
That Castiel guy, serious eye-candy.