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21 October 2008 @ 09:03 pm
Drabble: Bitter Sweet  
Title: Bitter Sweet
Author: Vesta
No pairing
Rating: R for disturbing images
100 words sharp
Notes: Fifth in the Under-verse, aka Shittyday-verse
Follows Under, Below,
Beneath and Raw

It's bittersweet, burning the stump of his tongue. He's given it, little by little. He knows what it can do, gave him his eyes back. Will give him his tongue. So they can use him all the better. Let him lick the sparse drops they give, make him last as long as they want. And they want. Everything. His tears, blood and spit. His soul and his unconditional surrender. They hurt him till he gives, then they hurt him again. The old love for them sparks to life, he has always loved them and he always will. No matter what.

Current Mood: ditzy
iamstealthyoneiamstealthyone on October 21st, 2008 07:11 pm (UTC)
More of the dark, ow drabbles. And so I must say it: Ow. You hurt him so.
Vesta: twobiggelois on October 22nd, 2008 07:16 pm (UTC)
He suffers so brilliantly, don't you think? But he will go to a happier place before I'm done, promise.
iamstealthyoneiamstealthyone on October 23rd, 2008 04:41 am (UTC)
He suffers so brilliantly, don't you think?


But he will go to a happier place before I'm done, promise.

He deserves some happiness.
softbluebuddy: I'm a Dean Girlsoftbluebuddy on October 21st, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
I'm deliberately using this cute and fun I'm A Dean Girl icon in contrast to the darkness in this part of the Shittyday 'Verse.

And, I read this in awe and wonder, just wanting to know if I could ever pull something like this off. I really don't think that I ever could, so my hat is off to you for exploring this place, yet again.

Oh, and have a nice day. :)
Vesta: twobiggelois on October 22nd, 2008 07:21 pm (UTC)
You know, I had a really good day. I made it seriously bad for someone else though :)A RL person that is, not poor Daddy W here.

This might not be the sanest of things to write but it works perfectly as stress relief.
The things you pull off are scorching hot, you know. And I think you're a nicer person than I am, you lack the psychopath mentality.

Thanks muchos.

Excellent contrast, btw, with the uber cute icon. Wanna snuggle now.
caz2y5: Dean of the deadcaz2y5 on October 22nd, 2008 05:29 am (UTC)
i love the blackness and despair that you convey with this verse. you rock!
Vesta: twobiggelois on October 22nd, 2008 07:22 pm (UTC)
And I was in such a good mood when I wrote it. Imagine that.
Thank you so very much :)